My only form of communication is blunt and straightforward. Which doesnt really fit this setting. Can someone help me rewrite this is a professional manner? I'm CCing all of managment, all of HR, and of course all my colleges.
Context: I asked for a raise and was denied, instead given the normal 2% raise. I put in my two weeks notice because another company offered me 15% higher pay. The same day my company countered by matching the 15% raise.
How would you recommend I say “you misunderstand, for me to stay you have to offer me a higher rate then what I am getting offered. Due to my skillset being is such high demand between this company and another, anything less than 20% raise is not unacceptable, but also an Insult.”
Also some where in there id like to bring up how they dont seem to have a plan to retain employees and it should be known to the rest of the people in the company, but not to worry. The company offering me the 15%, again you have to beat, has more positions open. I'm sure your current employees would love to hear this. (I want this to heard as a threat)