Finished graphic novel, thoughts?

Here's the (basically) finished graphic novel, hope everyone enjoys 😀 https://preview.redd.it/97j7dzgq5cr81.jpg?width=5100&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=2dbd362022733a337d53d867b39647835d7ee521 https://preview.redd.it/5kiv87hq5cr81.jpg?width=5100&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=9e2aa68418e4ccf4889d98a5d5c9c1731204117d https://preview.redd.it/pal489hq5cr81.jpg?width=5100&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=c2fc225afd602973688d3db34c78275be353213d https://preview.redd.it/89j706hq5cr81.jpg?width=5100&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=94bbe171b9897a99a23a9f854a5f1e52c7594373 https://preview.redd.it/p72hk5hq5cr81.jpg?width=5100&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=5250e88cf52ae8bb40492fa9f50c5969e1fd87eb