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making a satirical graphic novel about a guy blindly following the american dream, critiques?

Hi so I posted a while ago about a graphic novel and here it is in progress. I'm pretty new to graphic novel making, so would love some feedback, just make sure it is constructive criticism and not straight up insult 8'D please let me know if the story is unclear at any point! I was afraid to make it too in your face btw it's for art class so I'm not trying to make a masterpiece or anything Anyways, here it is: ​ page 1 page 2 page 3 page 4 page 5


Hi so I posted a while ago about a graphic novel and here it is in progress. I'm pretty new to graphic novel making, so would love some feedback, just make sure it is constructive criticism and not straight up insult 8'D

please let me know if the story is unclear at any point! I was afraid to make it too in your face

btw it's for art class so I'm not trying to make a masterpiece or anything

Anyways, here it is:

page 1

page 2

page 3

page 4

page 5

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