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Making a graphic novel about the current work system, would love some critiques or help +looking to interview people struggling with work/finances

I made a post earlier but now I have a general story for my graphic novel, it goes: Our main character is a blue collar worker in his 30’s He is a perfect employee. He arrives early, skips breaks, and works overtime to impress his boss. He was taught that if he worked hard, followed rules, and was a good citizen, he would be rewarded. He notices that the prices on the shelves have gone up, and he is excited, thinking that he’ll get a raise soon, if not for his “amazing work ethic”, then to account for inflation. The work that they do could be something that is considered unskilled, but society relies on. His raise turns out to be a pay cut considering inflation. He’s always dreamed of starting a family, but he isn’t ready financially. He is not moving up his company either, despite his hard work.…


I made a post earlier but now I have a general story for my graphic novel, it goes:

  • Our main character is a blue collar worker in his 30’s

  • He is a perfect employee. He arrives early, skips breaks, and works overtime to impress his boss. He was taught that if he worked hard, followed rules, and was a good citizen, he would be rewarded.

  • He notices that the prices on the shelves have gone up, and he is excited, thinking that he’ll get a raise soon, if not for his “amazing work ethic”, then to account for inflation. The work that they do could be something that is considered unskilled, but society relies on.

  • His raise turns out to be a pay cut considering inflation. He’s always dreamed of starting a family, but he isn’t ready financially. He is not moving up his company either, despite his hard work.

  • His hard work is only rewarded with more work, while others slack off.

  • He meets someone, and determined to start a family with them, he works harder, only to work himself to death through exhaustion.

  • The company’s response is cold, maybe shown through a meeting. “Let’s give a moment of silence to (protagonist)… Alright, now today’s meeting is about-“

How does that sound? I'm not a good writer but I have to do this assignment anyways. Also, I'm looking for people to interview, especially those who are struggling to find/keep a job, or a house

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